Globalization
has its pros and cons. On one hand, it leads to expansion of trades while on
the other hand; it results in adverse impact on the environment. Effects of globalization
include deforestation, global warming and pollution. These problems contributed
to major environmental issues such as accounting for 20 percent of global
carbon emissions, floods and air pollution. Critics argued that global
corporations shift their operations to countries with weak environmental
policies to avoid taxes, but the main reason for the shift was found out to be
the size of the local market. Efforts to reduce global warming have been
effective, with more nations gaining awareness of globalization and the successful
shrinkage of the ozone hole by the Montreal Protocol. The negative impact of
globalization could be further minimized if the major powers of countries are
willing to use both media influence and political power to promote change.
On one hand, it leads to (^)expansion of trades (word form) while on the other hand; it results in (^)adverse impact on the environment. Effects of globalization include deforestation, global warming and pollution. These problems contributed(Tense) to major environmental issues such as accounting for 20 percent of global carbon emissions, floods and air pollution. Critics argued that global corporations *shift their operations to countries with weak environmental policies to avoid taxes, but the main reason for the shift was found out(Red) to be the size of the local market. Efforts to reduce global warming have been effective, with more nations gaining awareness of globalization and the successful (shrinkage of the ozone hole by the Montreal Protocol THIS NEEDS REPHRASING). The negative impact of globalization could be further minimized if the major powers of countries are willing to use both media influence and political power to promote change.
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Natalie, please feel free to make the changes and resubmit
Gareth